E1門打開
黑暗的房間 → 落在臉上的楔形暖光
黑色剪影 → 被照亮的臉
E4

中景,一位飽經風霜、戴寬邊帽的女牧場主從穀倉明亮的門口走進提燈的光裡,寫實西部片,固定鏡頭從穀倉內拍攝。0–2s: 門口是刺眼的白色日光,她是一道黑色剪影。2–4s: 她向前走進穀倉。4–6s: 溫暖的提燈光照到她臉上,外套和五官的細節逐漸浮現。6–8s: 她的臉完全被照亮,身後是明亮的門口,她停下腳步望向前方。全程:乾草粉塵在光中飄浮,木造樑柱,鏡頭固定不動,一鏡到底。
Medium shot of a weathered woman rancher in a wide-brimmed hat stepping from the bright doorway of a barn into lantern light, photoreal western, locked camera from inside the barn. 0–2s: she is a black silhouette against blazing white daylight in the doorway. 2–4s: she steps forward into the barn. 4–6s: warm lantern light catches her face, the details of her coat and features filling in. 6–8s: her face is fully lit, the bright doorway behind her, as she stops and looks ahead. Throughout: hay dust floating in the light, wooden beams, fixed camera, one continuous take.
兩盞光都要寫:背後明亮的開口,和前方的主光。所謂揭示,就是主體從一盞光走進另一盞光。