20上段格擋
停在額頭上方
閃下去,再打回來
22擁擠拳擊館裡的教練主觀手持鏡頭,一位穿白色背心的波多黎各拳擊手閃過教練緩慢揮來的手靶,再反擊打進另一個手靶,電影感,正常速度。0–2s: 他在防守姿勢中彈跳,眼睛盯著鏡頭,教練的手靶露在畫面邊緣。2–4s: 左手靶橫過畫面揮向他的頭;他屈膝往外側一閃,從手靶下方躲過。4–6s: 他起身,對著鏡頭正前方的右手靶打出一記右直拳,攝影機猛地一震。6–8s: 他重新舉起防守並點點頭,腳步輕盈。全程:拳擊手從頭到腰入鏡,後方的沙袋和擂台燈光模糊,暖色鎢絲燈光,汗水閃閃發亮。
Coach's point-of-view handheld shot in a crowded boxing gym, a Puerto Rican boxer in a white tank top slips the coach's slow mitt swing and counters into the other mitt, cinematic, real time. 0–2s: he bounces in his guard, eyes on the lens, the coach's mitts visible at the frame edges. 2–4s: the left mitt swings across the frame at his head; he bends at the knees and dips under it to the outside. 4–6s: he rises and fires one right cross into the right mitt just in front of the lens, the camera jolting. 6–8s: he resets his guard and nods, light on his feet. Throughout: the boxer visible from head to waist, hanging bags and ring lights blurred behind, warm tungsten light, sweat glistening.
把來襲的攻擊寫得緩慢,並讓教練的手靶當攻擊者。這樣防守動作清楚易讀,也不暴力。